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The magic disaster
The magic disaster
In 2001 there were these girls called Elizabeth and sophia they lived near the library they always use to visit the library so they could get a good education.One day sophia went to the library and wanted to read a book but she was to addicted to it and she could not move.She saw books flying but her friend Elizabeth could not see them she just thought that her friend was going crazy but she wasnt all the books were actually flying but it was just invisible.
The books were on the shelves one minute they were up in the sky and all of the books that were floating started to fall and then sophia and elizabeth jumped on a blue chair.Then they started to float one of the problems were that sophia was scared of heights and she was also scared because she was thinking is this chair going to break.The girls thought it was impossible for kids to float on a blue chair but it wasn't the girls kept on thinking what should they do if the library was magical.One of the girls sugested destroying it but the other one said it could cost a fortune the girls kept on fighting then they told there parent’s and they didnt believe them.
The girls thought they had powers and tested themselfs and they did it got even worse because the girls started a big war.Then Elizabeth got stuck in her reading then everything looked bad then they went home they thought it was because of the fight they made friends so it will fix everything but it didn't work the reason why it didn't work was because they needed to read the story so everything will be normal but Elizabeth could not figure one word called helloween they were so mad.Elizabeth said the word and suddenly there was this big bright light it took the girls back in time and it all restarted but sophia remembered what happened so she never readed the book again the book was called Heloweenica.
The girls were lucky that the blue chair was fully armed so if it broke when they were flying they would not get hurt and if it broke on the floor they will still be alright and they won't get hurt either way.The girls burnt down the library and they locked it up until they made a new one so the magic will go away but it didn’t all the people that visited could of died but they didn’t.It went dark and dark and dark it was going so dark that it was past their bedtime the girls went back home and there mum told them to be back home early but they didn’t they were in trouble for a long time the girls were still in trouble but they kept on coming back home late so the mum and dad locked up the house.Everything was ok once they burnt it down because there house never got dirty and the girls listened to their parent’s so she can get out of trouble and so she could get a even better education than her parent’s.Then she used her imagination for good things so bad things do not happen to you or to your house or to any people around you.
The lesson learnt is you should imagine good things because bad things might happen and also you should just share ideas instead of making a war to see who is right and who is wrong.
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Introduction:Talofa lava my name is Ngaire and I go to Edmund Hillary School.
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Complement in a specific way:I like the way you talked about yourself and you showed us images.
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Add new information:Maybe next time you can add more information about yourself and you could change put your font bold because it is too thin.
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Finish with a question:I would like to know why you like Motocross and why it is your favourite sport.
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Introduction:Kia ora my name is Ngaire and I go to Edmund Hillary School.
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Complement in a specific way:I like the way you described the witch and how you described what kind of house she had.
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Add new information:you should re read and say why she punches and stuff.
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Finish with a question:I would like to know why does she live in a messy house.
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Introduction:Hi my name is Ngaire
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Complement in a specific way:I like your reading but you should re read your goal because it does not make sense.Also in your Maths goal you should re read and fix it up because you repeated the same word.One more thing you need to do is your learn create share goal.
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Add new information:I love all of it just make sure you check with a buddy because some of it dont make sense and some have repeated words.
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Finish with a question:When you fix it up I will want to know what is your learn create share goal.
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Introduction:Hello my name is Ngaire I go to Edmund Hillary School.
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Complement in a specific way:I like the way you showed us some pictures of what you like and how you put the information at the bottom.
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Add new information:You should check with a buddy because I can not see the writing and it looks like some of it is connected.
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Finish with a question:You should change your background and I would like to see more information about you.
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